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Tuesday, February 5, 2013


            The moon was high and gave light to the night. Monday sat on a swing and let her feet drag on the gravel as she lend against the cold chain, wondering, where to go now. She had made it to the end of the neighborhood and was now at a wooded park with a playground past its prime. She could go home but she could go back. Monday’s mind raced back and forth. Monday wanted to run back to a less confusing time but she couldn’t even think of one. All she could think about was being back in the bakery with Ezra the first day they met. She smiled at the moment of kindness but it quickly vanished; she couldn’t go back.


            Monday couldn’t remember the last time she had been on a swing. There was a rusted swing set at her house in Larkspur; Dion had bought it for her when he first married her mom. Monday loved the damn thing, even if it came with a damn price. Sometimes at night, Monday would sneak out and just swing and swing until she final jumped off and landed in dirt. Monday could see the swing from her window and as the years rolled by and Monday matured, she would still sneak out at night to swing. She would close her eyes and feel her body being pulled back and forth. Before she knew it, Monday was swinging again. Before she knew it, she had found a happy place, where the push and pull seemed to hold her together and not tare her apart. Monday closed her eyes and smiled.

            “Monday!” She thought she heard the wind whisper. Monday opened her eyes and looked around. The voice was familiar and, after a moment, hoped off of the swing, grabbed her bag, and ran. Monday ran into the wooded area next to the park and could hear name being called loader. The Nightlings harsh voices echoed in the dark and Monday couldn’t tell where they were coming from. The night that Pat died replayed in her mind when suddenly she was pushed to the ground.

            Monday fell over a tree stump and scrapped her knee. “What are you doing?” She heard what could have been Bo say, she turned to face him. He was much smaller then Ezra and is wings had a few tars in them but he didn’t look like he was going to kill her, instead he looked concerned.

            “I can’t stay here, I don’t want this life,” Monday said. Monday felt bad about running out on them, but thin something changed in Bo. His eyes dared down to her knee and Monday felt the blood trickle down. He wasn’t menacing but Monday could start to see a change in him. The boyish charm faded as he suddenly turned.

            “It’s me Bo. It’s Monday.” Monday screamed as he pounced and knocked her to the ground, going for the knee. Monday kicked him hard in the face, knocking him back. Monday grabbed a fallen branch and held it up in front of her. He crouched on all fours and growled at her. He leaped at her again and she swung the branch at him, and knocked him back. She left her bag behind and ran from him through the woods.

            “Monday!” She heard Ezra call out, but just thin, Bo attacked her from behind. Monday tried to scream but it aggravated him more. He was on top of her scratching at her and blood flung off of her arms as she tried to protect herself. He pinned her arms down and went for her neck. Someone pulled him off of her and Monday saw it was Jolene. Monday’s arms felt cold as her blood ran down them. Jolene tried to hold Bo down, but with one punch, he knocked her of him.

            Bo looked around and saw Monday. She reached down to pick up the branch but it was too late. She screamed for Ezra as Bo jumped at her again. She felt too weak to fight back this time and let him take her down. Bo dug into her back as tears ran down her face and she cried out in pain. Monday felt disconnected as the pain was too much and even when she felt the weight being lifted off of her, she was a lifeless ragdoll that Ezra rolled over.

            Monday could see Bo knocked out and Jolene tended to him and Monday could see Ezra trying to feel for a pulse but Monday felt gone. This was different this time; she was too cold and too broken. Ezra looked scared but Monday couldn’t hear his screams; she couldn’t hear anything. Her eyes just flickered as she looked up at him.

            There was a beauty to the power that the Nightlings had. She couldn’t hate them, even now. Monday was just in awe on how it had to end. With the last bit of her strength, Monday reached up, her arms were red and raged, and touched Ezra’s wing. It was like silk. He looked confused as Monday smiled, “I want-”

            Her world faded to black.


            The world was bright, way too damn bright, Monday thought when she woke up. When her eyes adjusted, she looked around and saw the brown walls of a hospital room. Monday tried to pull herself up but yelled out in pain, her arms and back was throbbing. Her cry did alert a nurse walking by.
           
            “Oh good, you’re up. I’ll let your doctor and parents know.” Monday tried to call back to her but she already left the room. The room was quiet, the only sound she could here was the beeping of machines from a few rooms away. Monday felt weak but alive.

            “M?”

            Monday turned to the doorway and saw a nervous woman. She was tall and wispy, with thick brown hair that she kept pushing out of her thin face. Monday knew that face, just like she knew the green eyes. “Mom?”

            That’s all her mother needed to rush over and pull Monday into her arms. Monday hurt but didn’t care; there was a part of her that had longed for her mother, a part that she didn’t know was there. As soon as her mother wrapped her arms around Monday, the weight on her shoulders was too unbearable. “I’m Sorry,” Monday cried.

            Her mother kissed her head and held her close, “it’s okay. You’re home.” Monday wanted to stay like this forever, but could since a black shadow nearby, sure enough, Monday looked over her mom’s shoulder and saw him leaning against the door frame.

            She hated everything about him, from his towering high and bushy mustache, to his bald egg head to his think glasses. He even wore that stupid plaid shirt with his thick belly pocking out that was almost a uniform for him. Dion Molesy. Even his name brought a bad taste to her mouth.

            Monday glared at him while she hugged her mother and Dion just looked at her with amusement. Suddenly, the machine went off. A nurse came in and checked Mondays pulse, “To much excitement for you today your blood presser is up.”

            “Probably just happy to be home,” Dion said, “or jumpy. Your attack is the talk of the town.” Dion came over and turned the TV on. On the screen was the park that Monday was attacked in.

            “Police are still investigating the animal attack that happened in Raven Park. So far, animal control hasn’t been able to find any sign of an animal nearby. While only one Victim so far, an unnamed 16 girl in stable condition, police advise everyone to stay in doors for now. Coming up at 7-”

            Monday turned the TV off, her mother kissed her on the head, “I’m so glad you’re all right.”

            “Do you know what happened Monds?”

            “Honey, not right now. Let her rest,” Her mother said, holding Monday tighter, “I’m just thankful that someone called 911?”

            “What do you mean?” Monday asked.

            “That’s how the paramedics found you. Someone called 911 but when they got here, the caller was gone. Seems weird to me.”

            Monday thought of Ezra kneeling over her and trying to revive her. Monday was glad that he and Jolene and Bo weren’t caught but it also made her sad. She was back home and away from the Nightlings, but the thought didn’t make her feel any better. Monday recalled touching Ezra’s wing and for a moment, she never wanted to leave them. She felt the temptation.

            Her mother hugged her tight and cried and Monday cried to. There was a part of her that missed the Nightlings, but another part that missed her mother. Monday had forgotten how good it felt to be wrapped in her arms.

            Monday staid in the hospital for two weeks, her mother and Dion held back on asking her about where she’s been. To Monday’s horror, the police came by to question her about the attack. Monday’s stories never changed; she was on the streets and was attacked, but never saw what did it. The police seemed to buy it but her family didn’t. They left the hospital, Monday on pain pills and bandaged up, and as soon as they got in the car, Dion turned around in his seat, “What the hell where you thinking!”

            “Honey, don’t yell. We can talk about this when we get home. Let’s just appreciate that she’s safe,” her mother turned to her and reached out, “We’re going to have to talk about this Monday, but let’s just go home.”

            “Can we make a couple of stops?” Monday asked: she wanted to see Alyson one last time and maybe go by and see Ezra, she wanted him to know she was alright. Dion shook his head, “We’re going home.”

            Monday laid down in the back seat and watched the lilacs pass by. Syringa was beautiful city, it had its dark secrets but it had a dream like quality to it. As the buildings passed, then the houses, the road itself, Monday longed to go back with every miles. After an hour, the Welcome to Larkspur sign passed and Monday sat up. Larkspur was a tiny town; the downtown was just a series of shops around city hall. Monday missed the grandeur of Syringa.

            Out passed the town and the brick houses, they drove into Monday’s neighborhood. It felt strange being back; the flood of memory’s made Monday’s skin crawl. Passed Alyson’s house, with the for sale sign swinging in the wind, they pulled up to Monday’s house. It was a little house with faded white wood panels and black shudders, Dion patted her on the shoulder, “Welcome home Monds.”

            Monday shuddered. They walked inside to the old furniture and white walls with family pictures scattered around. Her home used to feel homey, but that feeling was lost years ago. The door closed behind her and she felt her mother’s hand on her back.

            “Sit,” Monday sat on the couch, careful not to lean back. Her mother kneeled down to where she was eye level with Monday, “I want to know what the hell you were thinking. Your father and I were worried.”

            Monday looked down and played with her hands, her mother grabbed her jaw and jerked it up, “This isn’t time to be quiet. I want to know where you’ve been.”

            “I just wanted to see Alyson,” Monday said. At this, her family looked ferrous.

            “Why would you want to see her after what she did to this family? She tried to take this family apart.” Her mother said. “All of those nasty lies she spread about your father and you wanted to skip town to follow her?”

            “She dead Monday, she dead because she was a coward for not wanting to face what she did.” Monday jumped up and yelled at her step father, “She wasn’t a coward, you take that back.”

            “Big words to come out of your mouth little lady, you scared this family half to death with your antics and now you’re trying to defend that little slut-”

            “She’s not a slut!”

            “Enough!” Monday’s mother yelled, calming both Monday and Dion down. “Everyone is just on edge right now. The important this is that Monday’s home. We can talk about this later but I’m just glad to have my daughter back.”

            Monday smiled but Dion looked furious. Monday stood up, “Can I go to my room? I’m tired.” Her mother gave her a little smile, and ignored Dion as she made her way to her room. Monday’s room was at the back of the house, she approached the and took a deep breath before going in and closing the door behind her.

            There wasn’t much to the room. The walls were white but Monday had covered them all with so many posters of movies and music that you couldn’t tell. Each of the posters, however, Monday had put tape over the eyes because she felt like the people could somehow see her. There was a desk, a bed, and a dresser all painted white but the paint had faded over the years. On the nightstand next to the bed, were an alarm clock, a picture, and a calendar set to December 7: the day of Alyson’s funeral and the day that Monday ran away.

            Monday collapsed on the bed and wrapped up in her ratty orange comforter. She looked at the picture on the nightstand: it was a picture of Monday and Alyson from a few months back. It was taken in one of the mall’s picture booth and each picture of them making goofy faces, except in the last one where they were both laughing. Monday remembered that day, Dion was out of town.

            Monday got up and shoved her desk chair against the door, looking it in place. She then went and sat in the floor of her closet. Monday’s closest door had slants in it and Monday could see into her room with the door closed. In her line of view, Monday could see her bed. Monday stared there for what felt like hours just looking at it, remembering that night. Alyson had snuck over in the middle of the night when Monday had called her upset. Monday had shoved her in the closet when she heard Dion coming. Monday sat frozen, reliving the horror that she had put her friend through. Dion’s words rang in her ear: I’m going to teach you right.

            Monday could feel Alyson’s ghost haunting her, she could still hear Alyson word compete with Dion’s: how could you do this to me.

            They intertwined with each other and rose up, pounding against her head. Monday grabbed her head, wanting to make them shut up, but they wouldn’t loader and loader they rang together. Monday rocked back and forth until she fell forward and out of the closest.

            The silence was the worst. The words unspoken haunted her the most. She crawled into bed and sobbed, hoping somewhere, there was a Nightling getting rid of filth like Dion.

1 comments:

Rusty Rhoad said...

Good suspense, great pace. Looking forward to what comes next.